Face Engine

Blimey. That's depressing! But then, the title was more than enough warning of that. One tiny thing, where it says "And love it's light." I get the feeling you meant ...

I really liked this. I'm not entirely sure if I missed any hidden meanings, but I found this poem to be a good representation of the problems Humanity has caused ...

Hey Galerius, This was clearly a very solemn piece of poetry, the way you use language is very complex, well thought out, sophisticated... However, and forgive me if I sound ...

Wow...that gave me goosebumps! Some wonderful romance here-I'd love to see more. A happy ending would be really nice. I love the way the two "nerds" are portrayed here. I ...

I know this is a bit late but I just came across this and read errtu's comments. And I'm sorry if I'm sidetracking a little, but, frankly, I'm appalled. Not ...

I think a certain critique (I won't point any fingers) here was a bit harsh-don't ignore any of these replies, but remember that some people don't understand that it is ...

I quite liked this, I don't have a lot to criticise on. But I did notice one tiny thing. Are you aware that a decedent is a deceased person (thanks, ...

I liked this, it was dark and melancholy (I hope this is what you intended). I'm a bit confused by the "-ift" rhyming structure. The first two "I'm slowly falling ...

Noticed a few typos: “Alexander James Michaels.” Her stern voice make the six year old look up at his mother, his blue eyes sparkling in such a way that it ...

That was really sad, especially seeing as, I think, most people can probably relate to the narrator in the second stanza. I certainly can, anyway. I can't see much to ...

This is a really enjoyable read, especially for me as I previously didn't know anyone who has read The Zombie Survival Guide (aside from one friend who read it because ...

Ouch, that was painful to read (in a way I think you desired). I'm not a very good critic, but I noticed a small typo, " rreach out and pull ...

You're the want thing in my life, That I just can't live without, I wanted to be your wife, Now I just want to scream and shout. Just noticed a ...

I'm really bad at writing reviews, hence why I haven't dared to send a critique earlier on (I read the first part a couple of days ago). But, seeing as ...

I myself didn't notice any problems with the story until I read Hunter's critique. And now I have no choice but to agree with him, though I guess it is ...